THE VISITOR (A CHRISTIAN STORY BY DE-RACONTEUR)
EPISODE 1
Written By: Lizzy Oyebola Yakubu

(I STARTED THIS SERIES ON MY FACEBOOK WALL YESTERDAY BUT I WANT TO KEEP YOU RACONTEUR FANS UPDATED. SO WHILE I POST ON FACEBOOK AT NIGHT, I WILL SEND TO YOU IN THE MORNING.)
As I wiped my shoes against the foot mat, the atmosphere smelt really different.
âWhatâs that? Is something burning?â I thought as I turned the door knob and entered.
The sitting room was dark so I groped at the walls to find the switch. I flipped the switch and the lights came on. There was no one in the sitting room.
I looked up at the wall clock.
9.30pm!
âOh my! I am so late today!â I exclaimed as I dumped my handbag and my lunch box on the dining table and rushed to the kitchen to see what was smelling.
The kitchen was very tidy and there was nothing on the gas cooker. I checked the microwave, there was nothing inside. The oven was also empty.
I stood transfixed for a while as the smell I had perceived from outside grew stronger.
âWhat is that smell, oh Lord?â I asked, very dejected. I was very tired from the dayâs work that all I had planned to do was bath, have my husband massage my shoulders and then sleep. I felt so troubled that all wasnât going as I had planned.
I took off my blazer and hung it on the door. Then, I started the inspection of the whole kitchen. I couldnât actually place what the smell was but it was sure offensive.
When I checked the freezer and the fridge and the gas cylinder and couldnât detect what the problem was, I gave up the search.
âMy home is covered with the blood of Jesus! Lord, I give my house and my family over to You anew. Keep us from all harms. Thank You Lordâ I prayed shortly.
I sprayed some citrus air cooler and started walking to my childrenâs room. I opened the door and the smell greeted me there again!
âThe Blood of Jesus!â I exclaimed. My eyes widened the more as I realized that it was only one child that was on the bed.
I walked to the bed as fast as my leg could carry me, checked the face of the child on the bed and my heart dropped.
âWhere is Jemmy?â I asked aloud but Jeddy, her twin sister was sleeping too deeply to give me an answer.
I flew out of their room to start the search for Jeddy.
My first port of call was our room. There, was my husband on the bed, snoring so loudly. I scanned the room and realized that Jeddy was not with him.
I checked every single place in the house and even outside yet I couldnât find my daughter. Tears was already gathering in my eyes. I didnât know if I should be scared or not. I swallowed hard as I muttered some words of prayers.
âThe second sitting room!â A thought came to my mind and I hesitated.
âWhat would Jeddy be doing in our private sitting room all alone?â I frowned slightly. Only Bode, my husband and I relaxed there to enjoy the oceanic view at times. We met there also to pray every weekend when we hold our coupleâs fasting and prayer programme.
We often forbid our twins from entering the sitting room because it was our sacred room of prayer, love and power.
On a second thought, I turned the knob on the door and it was dark.
âOf course she canât be here. What was I thinking?â I said and was about closing the door when the strong smell I had perceived at the door wafted to my nose. I flipped the switch on very fast and there on the couch lay a woman and my Jeddy coiled like a newborn around her chest.
âWho is that?â I asked myself as I walked briskly towards them. I wasnât expecting any visitor. My mum and my mother-in-law had not told me they would be visiting.
The woman looked very elderly and familiar but I couldnât place it. The more I went close to her, the more the offensive smell increased.
I gently pulled off my daughter from her chest, pleading the Blood of Jesus. She stirred but resumed her silent snores.
I reversed quietly and shut the door.
I took Jeddy to her room, tucked her in her bed and hung their mosquito nets. I walked to and fro their room, prayerfully before exiting and moving to my own room.
Fuming as I entered the bathroom to shower, I was more furious that Bode wouldnât even stir at my entrance.
No matter how much I had tried to wake him up, he had been muttering âDonât disturb me, I am tiredâ and that was not usual. No matter how tired my husband was, he would usually wait for me before retiring to bed.
I changed into my nightie and adjusted the satin bonnet on my head. The sleep that had gathered in my eyes had disappeared. I picked up my Bible and climbed up into the bed.
My heart was very heavy. Though the smell had subsided, I was not clear what it was and why it grew stronger when I approached the elderly woman!
Who is that woman? Why didnât Bode pray with the children and tuck them in bed before sleeping? Why didnât he hang their mosquito nets? Why?
As I tried to calm myself, clinging to my big Bible, I felt so scared. I turned to look at Bodeâs face but he was far away in the dreamland.
I jumped down the bed again and knelt down, leaning against the bed.
âGod have mercy. I do not know why I am feeling this way but have mercy Lord. Have mercy Lordâ I kept muttering till sleep wrapped its arms round me.
I woke up to someone fumbling with my nightie. I shuddered all of a sudden as if I had come in contact with naked electricity.
âWho is that?â I slapped off the hand and jumped up suddenly.
âWhat is wrong with you?â Bode asked loudly, his left hand rubbing the right hand that I had slapped.
âOh, itâs you. I am so sorry. I thought it was someone elseâ I said and he frowned.
âSomeone else? Who would have the audacity to fumble with your nightie like that?â He asked and when I saw that the waters of jealousy and suspicion were already gathering in his face, I smiled it off.
âI have been feeling somehow since I came inâ I said and he nodded.
âCome and sit with me on the bed. You will be fineâ He said and I shook my head.
âBode, who is the woman in our house?â I asked and he frowned.
âThatâs my aunt. What is the matter? She canât come to my house?â He asked and I shook my head.
âBut I thought it would have been better if you had told me we were having a visitorâ I retorted.
âWhy should I do that? Is this your house? Did you build it?â He asked, a strange look on his face.
âHoney, are you for real? Can I suddenly bring a visitor home this way?â
âAnyway, that is my mumâs cousin. Her daughter in the USA just gave birth and she needs to visit her. She is going to be here till the visa is readyâ He said and I started feeling uneasy all of a sudden, slapping my thigh and shaking my head all at once.
âThat is not nice at all.â I said and he looked at me defiantly. I had not seen such look on his face since meeting my husband. He fixed his eyes at me as if ready to argue.
âHoneyâ I said calmly, walking close to him. âI feel really troubled about her presence. You know I wouldnât object to anyone visiting us but I feel somehow about her. Can we just pray about it?â I asked, holding his hand. He gave a long hiss and shook my hand off his.
âSo, I should tell her to leave? Câmon woman, use your medulla oblongata. Use your brain! She is my family member. I have heard that generally, you women detest your husbandâs family, so…â
âBode? I detest my husbandâs family? Really? Amongst the visitors we have had in this house, how many of them are my direct family members? I take care of your family as my own. This is a very different case, honey. I do not even know this person! I sudden feel bad at her presence. And as a wife, I am explaining my feelings to you. I am not even saying you should ask her to leave. How on earth would I say such? I am saying that I am not at peace with this visit and that you should letâs pay about it. Am I wrong?â I asked, my voice quaking. In our five years of staying together as a man and wife, my husband and I had never had a heated argument like that.
âYou are o! You are wrong! And you know what, Lara?â He asked, jumping down the bed and picking his pillow. âYou will eventually have to leave this house if you are uncomfortable with my aunt here!â
âWhat!!!â I exclaimed, very shocked.
âYou are too spoilt! I have spoilt you! That is why you can actually sit down there and tell me shit!â
âShit? Bode, shit?â I asked, my lips trembling.
As he was about moving out of the room, I ran after him.
âYou canât go out of the room, Bode. Why would you leave the room for me?â I asked and he shook his head.
âJust leave me please. Go away!â He pushed me off and shouted sternly. As I was regaining my stance, there was a knock at the door. I frowned slightly and looked at the clock.
12.30am!
âCan I come in?â The voice asked and I was shocked.
Come in?
At 12.30am?
Into our bedroom?
âCome…â My husband was saying when I raised my hands in absolute disagreement. He eyed me as if I was an abominable person. âCome inâ He eventually said and my mouth became suspended. I was too shocked beyond words.
What is happening?
Why is Bode behaving this way, Lord?
Am I overreacting Lord?
What is wrong with me?
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